a: Good sentence ~
b: fine cabinetwork
What: "A good sentence is like fine cabinetwork: the pieces are cut and shaped to fit together with scarcely any glue. When you find too many glue words in a sentence, take it apart and reshape the pieces to fit tighter."
Useful?
Writer: Richard Wydick
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Date: Oct 16 2013 10:35 AM
# 4103 Critique Analogy